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Thursday, September 13, 2018

Describing a setting.

This term we have been learning to describe a setting with lots of describing words and we are trying to paint a picture in the readers mind.

I strolled down the dirty path that lead to a crazy house.Rocks,stones,trees and a big green grass hill that sat on a lean.A brick house really, brick houses are  boring especially when it’s a dull brown colour. A plain rounded blue door opened with a slight of a creak. I went in and it lead to a tunnel not just a tunnel but a tunnel where you go in and it spins you around for about 6 seconds and then your out.Whatever you do seriously do NOT go in that tunnel.The roof of the dull brick house was covered by really soft light green grass.I looked up and it started getting windy I will run up and down the path to get warmer.I tried to lift up the roof,its stuck if your wondering why I tried to lift up the roof it’s because it was half hanging off.Windows shaped like a semi circle moon.The clouds started moving ahhh no it’s raining and there is a storm on its way.Crash,Boom,Crack i’m going to go into the little cottage house thing again.The lighting just about struck me. Boom! It was too late I was already laying down on the dusty dirty path “Help me”.Nobody answered it was like this house was abandoned and it was sort of creepy.

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